The World

How much world do you know? What is the meaning of creating the world?

The young scientist transfered to another world and successfully entered a vessel but he also encounter a problem! He must inform his success to his original world and then his job will be done.

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Waffle(est)Royal Road

★★★ 3.0

Paragraphs at least early on contain a lot of repetitive content and paraphrasing everything, this makes it very tedious to read.
There is also the problem of there beign an entire empty paragraph between every other (or often every single!) sentence. that amounts to 3 line breaks in a row and paragraphs no longer group related content, rather acting as a second but more distracting "." character. This is very distracting and makes it painful to read.
There is little content per chapter and much of it is repeated twice or thrice (but the massive vertical whitespace visually hides this)
My discontent on the tedius presentation aside the first chapters at least seem to have much improved grammar since the previous reviews
The characters are introduced in a very distant manner, "a merchant", "an old man" etc, this makes them hard to relate to or invested in.
Overall its still too painful to read.

ContradictionRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

Couldn't even bother to make it to chapter 2. Grammar completely breaks any immersion. It's apparent English is not the authors native language. The best comparison is a MTL story. If thats your thing, go for it. Can you read it? Yes. Would you want to? I sure don't. But I'm not going to completely tank a story only 1 chapter in. So 2.5 stars for an average rating.

NihilantRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

I tried reading but the grammar was too horrible for me, gave up after chapter 3

dositheeRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

Impenitrable gramar. Like a bad bad translation. Thanks for your hard work author-san and keep at it. I just wouldn't recomend this...

KandoralRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

1 1/2 stars, because the story seemed interesting.
bad part is, that the grammar is horrible, makes it hard to keep track
The author jumps alot with POV and you have trouble following the story because of the way he/she writes.
Without a rewrite i would not recommend it

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