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Can a computer virus from the future come to the past? What would happen if this happens? Can this computer virus be stopped? What would happen if this virus creates a body from scratch? Stay tuned and find out in the next episode of this novelUpdate of this will happen 3 times a week maybe more.I am still learning to write if you guys spot a mistake let me know and I will fix it right away

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DarkCloudsRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

i love the amout of update that the novel is having. the grammar of the story could be better. i like how the main character is evolving into a bad ass character. the story so far it is not force. it make sense how the author is writing it. he should improve more on his grammar. that is the only thing i dont like.

EEolRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

10 chapter review.
OK, so the grammar is an obvious issue, not disastrous but close.
Frankly there isn't much to hook you up at the moment, the tags and the pic may spark some interest but you certainly didn't capitalize it, and less face it, people attention span tends to wander very easily.
The premise is somewhat different, I would encourage to restart maybe after *she* takes over her body, you could intersect some of the first chapters of exposition during her recovery and interactions with her family instead of halfassing and rushing, maybe build the characters more.
Hope this helps, I'd like revisit this story later instead of faking the score (whereas hi or low)

WitikoRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

It was hard to read to say the least. I really like the premise of a time traveling program, but I dropped it after powering through the cringiness of the speech patterns of the virus. Was it intentional to make me want to rubs my face against the keyboard? If so, you're a goddamned genius!
Please partner with someone who can edit out this... attempt.

SniiksRoyal Road

★ 1.0

The power of clickbait made it's way to royalroad!

NiurnRoyal Road

★ 1.0

It's horrible, badly told. How in the seven hells did it arrive in the TOP20 trending list ? I guess the only redeeming feature is the cover pic with a big-chested instagram babe.
Behold the power of click-baiting !

GrekerenRoyal Road

★ 0.5

So yeah, the grammar is horrible. I couldn't make it past the first couple of lines.

ZapDaddyRoyal Road

★ 0.5

This book caught my attention and its premise sounded interesting. Unfortunately it has been abandoned and the author has not been back in over a year. Abandoned books get lousy reviews. If they didn't plan on finishing it they should have just removed it. I highly recommend against bothering with the story. Even though the cover image might be attractive, the fact that they couldn't even use a cheap editor or Instagram or even messenger to bodge together a title and an author's name on the picture probably speaks louder about the way this story is going to end up than I ever could.
Has a side thought, Royal roads really needs a zero Stars option. Abandoned books shouldn't even get half a star.

zimbimbarooRoyal Road

★ 0.5

This was a surprise. I assumed it would be "meh" because honestly most are. The picture is also a dead giveaway as to the quality standard. Then I actually started reading and realized it is so much worse. The author needs help. Please give thoughtful advice in the comments so the author can improve. It's one of the great things about this community that we can help eachother get better through feedback.

Computer Virus With a Real Body

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