Coming Back Home

Self-Published

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Description

The night she comes back from her best friend's apartment after finding out her boyfriend is married, she meets a huge man sleeping on the snow in her backyard. 23-year old Charlie Jordan doesn't know what to do.

After so many calls and studying, she finds out the man—Blurin Jameson— is an ex-militant whose address got mixed up on deployment day.

It takes Charlie 419 Days to realize how her heart beats faster when ever they're near or when his eyes lights up...

Or how she completes his amount of ribs.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020
Author
Aniekezie Blessing

Tags

COMEDYROMANCE SUBPLOTPSYCHOLOGICALCONTEMPORARY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
1,770

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • MaverickmanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Contemporary romances aren't the most common genres on RR, so it's a shame the story is so short as of today. I can already feel some anime influences in the story, and if this continues on a faster schedule on a site like Wattpad, I could see this becoming the next big romance novel.
  • KayTeaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    A contemporary romance. Not really super popular on RR and I think this'll be my first reviewing. I'll say from the start that the author has some bravery not caving in and just doing what everyone is (LitRPG, Fantasy, the works) and probably is just writing for fun or whatever is pleasing them.
    I don't think I can give a real full review because the story is too short to really judge it as it is currently (at the time of reading there's only four chapters). But from what I can see I honestly think English isn't the first language of our author. Because there's a lot of stilted dialogue and narration that's really awkward to read.
    The author wants it to be a romance but I think he/she is going for smut? I guess? Honestly think if they want to write that then they should just skip forward and show us the things that we, the readers would want to see and what the author wants to write. Because the chapters are sorta just beating around the bush.
    The story's not horrible, I just think as I said before there needs to be more chapters for a more constructive review. But I'll give the stars.