Collision of Myths

Self-Published

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Description

You all have probably heard this one. A hero is summoned from another world and is needed to defeat evil. That's all well and good. But this story is not about him. No, this story is about His younger brother who has been reincarnated as one of his descendants. And he's bringing with him all the myths and cultures from the other world with him. His journey will be one crazy turn after another. But it looks like he's just the person to accept the challenge.

P.S. This is my first time writing stuff like this so go easy on me with the comments. I may also need some help with spelling and grammar.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: DJH091317

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 99
Views: 64,336

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Community Reviews(3)

arkantosRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I am a big fan of ancient mythology, especially the Greek / Roman, I really like the fact that the protagonist can use the power of these gods.
Liamrodhudson331Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
As titled, this story has an interesting concept, though the execution is sloppy.
First is the protagonist : He's said to have been a genius, a Marry Sue basically. But so far he hasn't done anything deserving of such title.
The first fight, the fight with the white tiger was stupid. If you're a veteran at fighting and have knowledge about it, you're first instinct won't be making contract with some gods you don't even know exist, but find anything you could use to your advantage.
Throughout the first few chapters, there was no explanation on how one could make contract with a god, but suddenly he knows how to? And let assume his parents told him in hope he could grow stronger, I doubt gods would want to make contracts with some random kid off the street. Basically, the gods don't seem to have a standard at all.
This is further proven when Reyna, whom I know is going to be a harem member, contracted Kratos. Fucking Kratos. The one who literally slaughtered all the Olympian Gods and indirectly caused the fucking apocalypse, for some god forsaken reasons, decided to agree to a contract with some random girl.
Remember, Kratos isn't actually a god. He also doesn't have omnipresence, so he can't know who's making a contract with him and he agreed to it just like that? How does that even work? He's a god from another world, peharps even dimension or universe, are we just supposed to believe that that other world/universe/dimension works the same as this one? Hell, if its that easy to contract gods, why doesn't everyone do it? The gods seem easy enough, and unlike prostitute, you don't even have to pay them to be your bitch 😏.
That aside, where and how did Felix learn how to contract god. Did his parents teach him? Did he figure out on his own? Why didn't he try this before?
But what truly put me off is the protagonist's way of thinking. He doesn't seem to want to strive at all. He is just perfectly fine with borrowing powers from the gods, and it's stupid as the powers ar
Abyss 404Royal Road
★★ 1.5
Look, you have a good idea, however, having a good idea is only the first part of writing.
Before you post, read your own chaptechapters and honestly ask yourself this: would I read a story with so.many obvious plot holes and grammar mistakes?
Would I read chapters filled with so many mistakes it almost makes me care of the wonderful concept?
Try to edit the chapter or even rewrite them
Quality is more important than the quantity of release