Collective Mind cannot understand
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Description
What is a person? What is humannnes? Do elves have humannes? Or do they have elvinnes? And what is justice? Care? Love? I can't understand.
The story is about how the collective mind tries to understand people and other intelligent beings. But for some reason, sometimes he understands things in his own way.
AN: I will temporarily stop writing chapters. Be patient
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Shystrex
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 48
- Views
- 14,712
Chapters(31 total)
- BestiaryAug 25, 2021
- Chapter 30Dec 5, 2021
- Chapter 29Nov 28, 2021
- Chapter 28Nov 14, 2021
- Chapter 27Nov 8, 2021
- Chapter 26Nov 7, 2021
- Chapter 25Oct 31, 2021
- Chapter 24Oct 11, 2021
- Chapter 23Sep 26, 2021
- Chapter 22Sep 19, 2021
- Chapter 21Sep 13, 2021
- Chapter 20Sep 5, 2021
- Chapter 19Sep 2, 2021
- Chapter 18Aug 27, 2021
- Chapter 17Aug 24, 2021
- Chapter 16Aug 20, 2021
- Chapter 15Jul 24, 2021
- Chapter 14Jul 18, 2021
- Chapter 13Jul 17, 2021
- Chapter 12Jul 11, 2021
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Community Reviews(1)
- WaxisfunRoyal Road★★★ 3.0In general a pretty good story, however it feels like the author has a really good idea and is rushing to put as much of it on writing as possible without paying much attention to sentence structure or grammer. The dialogue format is especially confusing and at times it's difficult to determine who is speaking about whom. I got all the way to chapter 10 just on the merits of the story itself however as the MC develops more dialogue increases between the characters which frankly just becomes too painful to read. What's also difficult is that the story has a LOT of potential. I genuinely want to keep reading it however a good idea can only take you so far. I enjoy how the MC wants to understand the world around them but in order to convey the growth and make the reader understand and form a connection with the MC you need to be able to convey the concepts to the reader, especially in dialogue which I know is no easy feat. I would recommend that the author stop posting more chapters and go back and read the dialogue aloud.
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