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Due to an unfortunate accident, Alexander King lost the ability to move his body. However, with the advent of Virtual Reality in 2030, Alex won't be helpless for too long.Join Alexander King in his new journey in the world of Novus Mundus as he brings chaos along with adventure.Rated Mature only for mild language and violence.

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kilaske990Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Giving five because somehow this is rated badly than it should be. Really give it 4 atleast. Until more chapters.
Great writing. Good length. No spelling error(or just missed it).
Good story or atleast okay.

MulcanzerRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

First off I really like the characters so far in the story and where they seem to have some loyalty to each other.
My confusion and apparent denseness seems to be about the beta and how he seems have some past history I can't seem catch onto. Was there another story before this that I should have read first?

lbutl25Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Not a bad read, the author does have some unique ideas which are pretty fun to read. Biggest glaring problem I can see is that the dialogue writing style the author uses is doing a massive disservice to the story.
“ **** ** **** “ (mom)
“*** *** ***” (son)
etc etc.. way of dialogue is considered bad because you lose so much interactions between the characters and can be quite jarring to readers because for me it felt like it interrupted the flow of the story.
Here’s an example; “Wow mum you look great today” said Bryan while trying his best to keep a straight face. “Thank you!” she exclaimed with obvious happiness.
Compare that to; “Wow mum you look great today” (Bryan) “Thank you!” (Mum)
You need the descriptions of actions to add depth to the characters and the scene otherwise the reader will only be able to see a much shallower part of the characters and scenes.
Kudos for having a crack at writing, I hope you can keep trying and improving as you go.

CruxioRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

It might be good. But not really that interesting at the moment. Afterall he is benefiting from beta. Which was never retold in the story. On the technical side of the story.Grammar was ok. The pace was a little bit below average. The story doesn't have depth.
It is just starting, ill give it a chance

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