Chronicles of Dread and Porcelain (A Progression Fantasy)

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Description

A doll. A master. A desire for glory.

Six months after a magical event left the Queendom of Asden with more questions than answers, the slums around the capital are the initial stage for May's Path into her master's arms. One that might grant her the power to finally be worthy.

But she is not alone. All over Asden, different creatures arise, claiming their Gifts and united by a thread the world doesn’t remember. Once again, Creation stirs.

Will this be the end? Or a new beginning?

Original cover art by LoveBizarreOdities - https://www.deviantart.com/lovebizarreoddities

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Triarty

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
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MoonlightGardensRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
As long as you’re willing to read longer chapters, this is a great story with a lot of potential.
Style (5/5)
Overall, there’s not much to say. It focuses more on internal thoughts, with the occasional flashback, at least in the beginning. It doesn’t do much to negatively affect the enjoyment of the story—unless the reader is someone more interested in interaction. Though judging by the end of the last chapter I read, that may be changing quickly.
Story (4.5/5)
The premise seems pretty interesting; a doll hoping to be worthy of her master. A sense of mystery is introduced rather early on as the readers are left to wonder about all of it. We learn about the world by what these characters say and do. The only thing is, it feels like the mystery gets lost in some places—a lot of things can be introduced but not a lot of explanation or hinting of what they truly are.
Grammar (5/5)
There’s only a few minor errors, really nothing to complain about.
Character (5/5)
The main character has a fair share of mysteries about her, but ones I presume will be discussed as the story progresses. Beyond this, the only two characters of interest are the MC’s master and the woman from the prologue. They both show potential as well, allowing readers to hope to know them more.