Chronicles Of A Telekinetic

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

RubberPeen

• Mission Details
  Mar 31, 2023
• Month Later
  Mar 29, 2023
• Transaction
  Mar 27, 2023
• Fight!
  Mar 24, 2023
• A Short Flight
  Mar 22, 2023
• News Report
  Mar 20, 2023
• Black Cat
  Mar 8, 2023
• Begin Phase 1
  Mar 6, 2023
• Morning After
  Mar 1, 2023
• Party
  Feb 27, 2023
• V.I.?
  Feb 24, 2023
• Back Home
  Feb 22, 2023
• Last Day
  Feb 20, 2023
• The Farm
  Feb 17, 2023
• The Highway
  Feb 15, 2023
• The CDC
  Feb 10, 2023
• The Group
  Feb 8, 2023
• The First Night
  Feb 3, 2023
• Mission Start
  Jan 30, 2023
• Finally?
  Jan 27, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(5)

• HieiUchihaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I am loving the story so far. Congrations for being the 1nd story I have reviewed so far on this site. I am fairly new to this site but I am a long time fan or original and fan fiction site like AO3 and FFN as well  as the webnovel genre. I am psyched to see how you take this story and what develops. I see the probability of the main character mostly dabbling in the dark in regards to his main world, such as the crime underworld of the John Wick movies and such with perhaps any supernatural/super power elements you initially incorporate, though will we see the power threshold escalate to the level of the MCU/DCEU/Snyderverse? I would imagine that being an epoch climax event leading to the  end of this story and you going into a sequel.  If I might suggest some other movies and shows you might not have thought of that would be in line with your thought process as to the initial fleshing out of the more covert/hidden elements of the world? I think adding The Shadow and Black List would be other good potential characters to draw from, though I imagine in the case of The Shadow it wouldn't be Lamont Cranston himself, but perhaps his son or grandson? Then again, his power set is quasi mystical and psionic, which could include longevity/semi immortality. Also, good counters and perhaps interesting fights to pair up with our MC would be including perhaps Remo Williams/The Destroyer or including the movie Barry Gordy's The Last Dragon. So as to prevent thee main character just roflstomping all over everyone through the progress of the story and make it repetitive. Anyways, great job so far and hope to see more!
• wheresJerZRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Very happy with the rewrite, love the new direction. Hes still op but thats fine, removing all the crazy gimmicks like world travel, system boss, and making the shop a much more expensive challenge allows him to grow more organically. Lots of fun potential with all the sitcoms and dramas on his world without him needing to make other worlds the priority immediately. Also like him taking relationships slower and more organically.
• Samuel CicirelloRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The writer went on hiatus, which was very sad learning it after I started reading, but if the writer ever came back, the story has the potential to be excellent, and I would definitely jump on one of their Patreon’s if they set it up. Anyway just be warned, it hasn’t been written on for several years, but it is a pretty good idea and a fun read.
• DBoyBluesRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  A good story so far. It has the natural drawbacks of having a system and world hopping genres go (not too much of a spoiler, it gets into it pretty quickly, no more detail though.) I will say the author didn't really mention mc having a inventory well and it's it's blink and you miss it kinda deal, otherwise, very few grammar mistakes and pretty consistent if not flash levels of speed on the plot. (The plot is slow for first 3 ish chapters before it takes off like a jet. It does keep good consistency, though I hope author doesn't get lost in their sauce at the speed they are seemingly going.). Overall I recommend it to those who enjoy power fantasies, overpowered mc's, world hopping, and plenty of references to pop culture. (I had to look up the movie mc is a main stay in, and you should at least read the imdb for context.. threw me for a loop). Please keep it up author (note, I didn't give you 5 stars for two reasons, one is your doing well and have room to grow and I don't want you to think it's perfect. It needs some work but is VERY promising. Only time I got upset is when I got caught up to last chapter... *not so subtle cough* more chapters *cough cough*. Second reason is many people just skim 5 star reviews because hollow praise is hollow, I hope they read my nonsensical review to get a base idea of what your presenting and can give it a good try. Either way, keep it up, I'm looking forward to where you take this.)
• NamtekcorRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I really enjoy the story I like the previous version but this version was better I come back and read this every so often hoping for an update but it's been a while i also enjoy the other stories the author writes but I'm really curious on where this one is going  I hope it gets updated one day