Chronicle of Lost Reminiscence
Community Rating
Description
The world of Retintia is a vast and beautiful world, filled to the brim with all sorts of creatures, magic and mystery.
One day, a boy wakes up at the edge of the kingdom, his memories gone. There was no one around him, and he had no idea about where he was. The only thing he knew about himself was his name - Nashiro. As he stumbles around in confusion, he finds a village. He felt a brief moment of joy before he realized the dark truth, the people of the village had been slaughtered. Was he a part of the assault? Perhaps he was a villager? Or was he just in the wrong place at the wrong time?
Determined to know more about himself and recover his memories, follow the story of a boy on a quest to reclaim his lost identity in a vast and dangerous world of grand opportunities, malicious individuals and magical intrigue.
----------------------------------
Hello there, this is a story I came up on my own. As an author, I'd like to interact with my community and get ideas and what I can improve on. I'm not perfect and don't expect a masterpiece. I may have a bit of experience writing as a hobby, I make mistakes and my style is a bit rough around the edges. I hope you stick around and watch me build this story up.
I don't have a predetermined schedule and the releases will be slow. Since I got college, my schedule is most likely 1-2 chapters a month but that shouldn't be that bad since I get some time to think about what I can write in the story. Again, my apologies for that. I hope I have your support moving forward and that you enjoy the characters and their journeys.
Currently reworking the chapters :)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Xtreme4trace
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 6
- Views
- 4,372
Chapters(11 total)
- Chapter 10 - RewardOct 9, 2022
- Chapter 9 - Arguments and new problemsSep 4, 2022
- Chapter 8 - Helper (part 2)Jul 17, 2022
- Chapter 7 - Helper (part 1)Jun 2, 2022
- Chapter 6 - Wolf encounterApr 28, 2022
- Chapter 5 - A place to call homeApr 6, 2022
- Chapter 4 - The all important check-upMar 7, 2022
- Chapter 3 - To the townFeb 19, 2022
- Chapter 2 - The Rangers HideoutFeb 8, 2022
- Chapter 1 - Village of deathJan 27, 2022
- Chapter 0 - A lonely boyJan 2, 2022
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(1)
- BewareTheChainRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Chronicle of Lost Reminiscence is - as the title entails - a story about an amnesiac. This is well-trodden ground in the fantasy genre, but as with any trope, it has its advantages as well as its drawbacks. In this case, we get to experience a new world alongside the protagonist, a sixteen-year-old boy named Nashiro.
From what I can gather, there's an element of litrpg to this story. It's not something I am terribly familiar with, but so far it's only been brought up once or twice, in case it's not your thing.
The setting is a typical western fantasy world, and there's a certain sense of comfort to be found in the familiarity of such a setting, even if the protagonist himself doesn't feel like he belongs.
The story seems to be ramping up, and I'd certainly be interested to see who exactly Nashiro is, what happened to him, and what he'll do in the future.
"99% Human." That line in particular stuck with me.
I wonder how that'll play out.
Grammar and syntax-wise, there are errors here and there, such as changes in tense, sudden switching of perspective or discrepancies in the overall formatting. I'd suggest perhaps doing a once-over of the whole story just to hammer out these little kinks, but it was far from unreadable.
A good show for your first fiction.