Child of Cosmos

Self-Published

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Description

Mark was an ordinary man, but when the System integrated Earth, an unordinary path was opened up. The Cosmos is within reach, but will he reach it, or will he be lost among the stars, forever forgotten among the great powers of the Multiverse.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
K.F.Linden

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSTRONG LEADMALE LEADPOST APOCALYPTICHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
106
Views
17,383

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Forrest AndarRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    If I had read further than the first 2 chapters, I might have given it a lower rating.  But who knows, I might have given it a higher one.
    As it is, I didn't feel great giving it a lower score with such a small sample size, so I gave it 2.5 stars.
    This is another example of a story that I do not like. However, due to my lack of a degree in English, Literature, or a related field, I struggle to articulate precisely what I find 'wrong' with it.
    The descriptions of the environment & the characters actions really fail to paint a clear picture for me.  The words that come to mind are stilted, awkward & confusing. The method of choosing his path/class/magic was nonsensical.
    At the end of the second chapter, I feel like I have no idea what is going on with this story, and I can no longer be bothered to try to figure it out.
    Best of luck with the future chapters.