Cheat Hero

Self-Published

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Description

A man lost his life protecting his beloved.Reborn in another world as his character in the game he playedBut with a twist.--------------By the way Im looking for some PR's

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
iCaelus

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
506
Views
150,342

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • Neko-nee sanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    You should keep it up! I gave you the same rating as the first did because of the same reason. I had to reread to make sure I wasn't confused with their genders.
  • SoundBoundRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I'd have given a full five stars but just minor spellings mistakes that are the type of being confusing an example would be "his" when you were talking about the MC's mother POV.
    That's about it, in all honesty good story so far.
  • LuckRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I love the flow of the story and please Explain more of how he unlocked that power of his. I am confused because he suddenly gain 20% of his power so please explain it a bit more and please fix your spelling even though it is a minor mistakes it can confused the readers so i said this early so you can improve the story and please don't take offense of this as i am just giving an advice
  • deepak goreRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The story is interesting.He could've been 6-7 yrs old, that would've been more realistic than a 2yr old kid.But the biggest mistake is your english.Him is for male,her is for female.If i was your english teacher I would've committed suicide by now.
  • SponsRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    A very typical male power-level fantasy. Doesn't mean it's bad, though. Chinese call these stories YY-- mental masturbation. However, this story was riddled with simple mistakes that could be fixed easily with just a second read. What's different from your typical male power-level fantasy is that this story is really not trying to hide how childish it is. I mean come on-- dual wielding katana's, black hair blue eyes + feminine face, you're not even trying to hide the self-insert here. I could almost picture a neckbeard with a katana in one hand and the other hand tipping his fedora. 2 stars for effort.