Chasing Freedom
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Description
It's way late, but I'm officially announcing this project dropped. I may or may not revisit it later, I do like a lot of aspects, but I think I was trying to make it too complicated.
Book 1 of The Dove and the Raven
Spies. Thieves.Assassins.Twin slaves since the death of their mother. They were purchased by a nobleman with his own agendas. Beaten and brutalized he remade them into cold monsters to do what he needed done. But they are not what he thinks they are, and he has no idea that they cannot be broke as long as the other lives. They have agendas of their own.
Even as the world is literally falling apart around them, the only thing they care about beyond each other is their freedom. And they will get it one way or another. Gods and like be damned.
**Updates are somewhat irregular but I will try my best to get at least one chapter up each weekend, either Saturday or Sunday. I had hoped to be more often, but weekdays are proving to be a challenge for me to write.
Information
- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Feral.Queen
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 4,480
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Anime-SenseiRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Overall its a decent read. However there is only 3 chapters to read, down the line my review could change. For now take this review with a grain of salt, and some scepticism.
The style seems ok. Nothing besides an above average of variety of word play. This style also hinders the story with so much detail the pace of the story is much slower then what it should be.
Grammar is better than my own, no complaints. Saw one mistake, and the rest were negligible.
Story seems to have one MC. Not too much is going on, just the start of much more which I like to see. Then that also conflicts with how serious you can view my judgement of this particular criteria.
The MC is a heroine, and a decent one at that better than I can do. Seems realistic, again I cant tell if this realsim will stay the same as the story progresses.
In the end read if you like stories with a cautious heroine that has a grudge or two against aspicious people that are shady.
Good luck author! - Heaven DreamRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Overall, it's good! Keep it up.
There are few minor mistakes in writing, but, it's fine, my story had those too.
As for your style, making the story detailed is good. It can make us think the scene clearly. But, doing it much is a little problem. It's just a minor thing so you can change it.
The grammar is good, just few mistakes here and there. It's okay, nobody's perfect. Even me, I had lot of grammatical mistakes.
The concept of character is quite decent, it just lack some advancement.
Well, I only read 4 chapters so far, I cannot clearly judge your work.
Keep on writing. Good luck too.
P.S: This is only an early review. - Venom 1309Royal Road★★★★ 3.5IT was an enjoyable read, but there only 5 chapters in so there so much more room for development
The style is decent enough, better than mine in fact. each sentence is very clear and easy to imagine the situation but it does become over too detail that makes the story a bit slow.
grammar is great, there a few mistake but nothing perfect right?
Story not much to say because of it still too early, if it WAS 10 chapters or more. My opinion might change but for now, it good story
can't say much for the characters because there's only one heroine although she seems to catch my attention.
Keep it up and good luck!