Charge of the Faithless
Self-Published
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Description
Mark is one of the unblessed. He has no powers, no cool abilities. He's just a vulnerable human whose only option is to make weapons out of scrap metal and hope they keep him safe for longer than a few years. But Mark wants to be more than just a weakling in need of constant care. And so he's started working on the biggest undertaking of his life - a weapon that can match the power of the blessed. His assigned partner, Nora, isn't a fan of his antics, but it's not long before they realize their conflict in ideology is the least of their concerns.
*Cover info: Lineart by Klee, made for the express purpose of telling this story.Colorsand shading byPyre,author of the book.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- - Pyre -
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- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 1,001
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RamzeyRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I've just finished reading the first 2 chapters and I must say this novel's quality is top notch!
In terms of style, I give it 5/5 as there doesn't seem to be unnecessary details involved. As for grammar, English is not my strong point, but I am able to notice when sentences are eloquent enough to the point where they don't even have to be fancy but still attractive to the eyes when reading, so another 5/5!
Story wise, I give it 4/5, but do not be mistaken as it doesn't mean that I am implying that its bad. The reason being is that as a reader, I would love it if each chapter is longer.. perhaps at least 1.8K words per chapter at minimum should satisfy my greed heh.
Character score: I give it 4/5. In general, I believe this should be the sum of appearance and personality (there is progression as well, but that's for another day) of the characters. I think what might help the readers to be more immersed in imagining the characters would be the details in describing the height, hair color, face, body, clothing and age. Although I am not sure in what specific order should they be introduced into the story myself, nor should they be in a whole paragraph or segregated along the way, I think this score should be fair.
Overall, the pacing isn't at all forced and natural, no info dump at all. I'm really looking forward to read more in the future as a mix between techs and mystical powers are really up to my alley! Goodluck author!