Chaotic|Nonsense
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A band of friends in the far future, they met eachother in the game, played with eachother, formed bonds together, celebrated together, created a group together, all based on one idea 'The Devs aren't able to make interesting enough events, they're too constrained, so we'll be the event!". But when the devs and creator are all unkown, and the NPC's are all sentient, randomly casting infernoes in town squares and turning the fountains into rampaging elementals can get you in trouble IRL. But, it clearly doesn't end there, so read on dear reader, and see how far it goes.
Information
- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Sckribe
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 6
- Views
- 4,969
Chapters(6 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- jmmastersRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0There are lots of points I'd like to highlight in the story but at the risk of giving spoilers, I will point out only the major ones I saw. If you want to know more, then I suggest you pick up/or open the pages and give it a try. You won't be disappointed!
Style - The only reason that I'm giving it a 4.5 is because the author seems to not have settled on his style yet. There are parts where the pacing is irregular. From fast then it suddenly shifts into a slow pace. Not to worry, if you don't speed read and take things leisurely, then you will find that the style actually fits.
Story - It has a lot of potentials. It kind of reminds me of Overlord wherein the story focuses on the side of the "villains" instead of the protagonist. Although basing from what I've read so far, the characters are quite different from the aforementioned novel. In two chapters, the author has introduced the characters but left their personalities a mystery (for a later chapter I guess). So will patiently wait.
Grammar - The grammar is alright. There are a few points that need improvement which is the reason why I chose to give it a 4.5 instead. Given proper polishing, I know he'll be able to improve it. And if that happens, the story will improve a great deal.
Character - As I've mentioned prior to this, characters were already mentioned but since the first few chapters focus first on world building, characterization tends to fall behind. Nevertheless, he was able to give concise descriptions that make each of his characters unique in their own right.
In conclusion, I recommend that you read this while at home where you can appreciate the story for what it is. Will definitely wait for more!