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Description
John hasn't seen his family in weeks but now that the apocalypse has happened he will travel through the nine circles of hell to get back to them even if before he was going to disappear forever.
Doesn't the apocalypse change people?
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- dragongod_ra
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 946
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- The Book KeeperRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The first chapter pulls you in the world, that the writer has created, fairly quickly. The expression of writing is also pretty good. The twist of it being a tutorial was also decently done.
A few critiques- Try to use more punctuations in the sentences as it gets difficult to understand what you mean sometimes.
- The main character isn't made clear as other people doesn't address him as much.
- The chapters often end abruptly.
Nice start though.