Challenged Dungeon and the Arrival of Mana

One day, a few spirits drifting through the astral plane discover Earth and decide to create dungeons to bridge the gap between worlds, and eventually make themselves the gods of Earth.

After being created, Three has the misfortune of falling through a grate in an alley in New York City and making that its entrance.  Suddenly propelled to sizes much larger than an infant dungeon should be it becomes the frontrunner of all its sibling dungeons, yet faces problems initially attracting creatures.  Three's problems only worsen over time as its demanding and seemingly capricious creator gradually strips away its ability to be a true dungeon while compelling it to reach a nearly impossible goal: conquer all humans.

Also follow Stan, the alcholic veteran cop and his pet cat Ms. Winters as they get embroiled into the arrival of dungeons and mana.

I have most of the story mapped out, but it can still use some work, my goal is to release at least a chapter a week until I am finished.  I would greatly appreciate any help proofreading or editing, and advice is always appreciated.

UPDATE

School caught up with me back then and I lost the thread, so this is now (definitely) dropped, sorry all, maybe I'll get back to it one day.