Celestial Magus

Self-Published

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Description

-- on indefinite hiatus --

Follow the epic journey of an otherworldly scientist who have transmigrated into the body of a young man in a world where magic is the norm.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Immortal Graviton

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSTRONG LEADMALE LEADREINCARNATIONSTRATEGYCULTIVATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
576
Views
273,605

Chapters(43 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • Maddog2960Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    It has a good ideas but grammar just feels choppy and I think the writer is not a native English speaker unfortunately due to the way it's written I have hard time reading it although I also find the main character way too naive yada yada yada yada too review length yada yada yada yada yada Yadav a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a
  • ShadowOfHAvocRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    This story is a fairly typical transported to another world story with a mix of cultivation and magic system. The problem with this story though is that there is no development. Everything happens so quickly and it come across as pretty rushed. The fact that the grammar isn't that great doesn't help either.
    I would recommend that the author work on improving the flow of the story, as well as spend more time developing the characters and the world. Some more time describing his training and his time inventing stuff wouldn't hurt either.
  • pewpewcachooRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Honestly the writing is good, the grammar seems fine. The story is okay, but the author wrote it in a weird way. I get what he was trying to do and honestly I struggle myself with writing so I can't really complain about it. Author keep up the good work and keep writing, it will get easier to write with more practice.
  • Hephaestus191Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    I gave this novel a pretty good shot, it seemed like an interesting take on the whole transported to another magical world trope at first. But there is a huge fixation on creating guns and artillery and almost zero regarding the world, magical system or even basic character development. The MC just holds an internal monologue about his experiments in developing gunpowder and guns without there being any kind of insight into his character or the people he surrouds himself with.