Celestial being in a mans body!
Self-Published
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Description
This is a story of a Celestial being in fantasy world enjoying vacation ??
This is my first story so criticism is accepted...
also correct me if I did any grammatical mistake because I not good at it
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- minhu
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 334
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- 1Royal Road★★★ 3.0In this story, the premise is what carries it. A being strong enough to destroy the 7 creators of the world goes on vacation in a world of magic. Sure, it's going to be a self-indulgent power fantasy, but it sounds awesome. Otherwise, the capitalization, spelling, grammer, and sentance structure were all inconsistent and reduced my engagement with the story.