Can you please stop killing me? a lit RPG adventure
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Description
Two friends are transported into a world with game-like rules and no memory of how they got there. They have lost their memories and only have an intuitive understanding of language and ideas. T
Uncovering secrets of the world and battling against its societal structure they try to get back their memories and almost inadvertently stop the evils in the world but doing so only adds more questions.
work in progress. 50% done and was done quickly without much drafting. (drafting will come later) (there are lots of notes and the story has grammatical errors + inconsistencies).
patch 0.2
intro bulked out added more structure, resurrection less naked, grammar improved up to chap 15 or so.
There are two main characters, and the mana theory is an original slightly scientific concept.
the main character will die.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Alexander Hemming
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 40
- Views
- 53,992
Chapters(65 total)
- 64. A well Orc'estrated finaleFeb 20, 2020
- 63. ChaosFeb 8, 2020
- 62. CollapseJan 31, 2020
- 61. ScoutMasterJan 20, 2020
- 60. AnalysisJan 12, 2020
- 59. AkuJan 5, 2020
- 58. Anti-Anti-climaxDec 18, 2019
- 57. ProgressDec 11, 2019
- 56. GriffonDec 3, 2019
- 55. A subtle deep voiceNov 26, 2019
- 54. A spy.Nov 19, 2019
- 53. Meat cuteNov 12, 2019
- 52. ApproachNov 3, 2019
- 51. forcesSep 17, 2019
- 50. Barbra GordonSep 5, 2019
- 49. CrystalsAug 26, 2019
- 48. Into the dungeonAug 18, 2019
- 47. ResearchAug 17, 2019
- 46. A blue dawnAug 12, 2019
- 45. craftingAug 5, 2019
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Community Reviews(2)
- Lord WasdRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0So, you think this is another isekai litrpg? Well you're not far of the mark. The characters know that they are in a game, but its a glitchy one. The level up choices are a bit bugged and the MC-s (yes there's 2) have no clue how they got here. Well, they find out a lot of clues later, and it hasn't got anything to do with gods.
This story has got potential because its a meta litrpg.
The story seems interesting, but i won't spoil anything.
The grammar is off-putting but it isnt unreadable like some other stories, think of The Strongest Skill: Getting rich while becoming stronger, grammar wise.
The characters have backstories and personalities, and they all know eachother from before, so they are not blankt slates.
All in all
Ok characters, ok story , mediocre grammar. Give it a try - SchuldraighRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0A good story if you can get around all the typos. The dual perspective is disorienting at times, and the lack of shift indicators doesn't help, with the many typos and odd grammar making it even rougher to read. Basically, it just needs a proofreader to polish it off.