Can i please get a female demon lord on the 10th world(Hiatus)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

Glossalia

• NOT A CHAPTER 2(BUT PLEASE READ)
  Jan 1, 2016
• S2 CHAPTER 19: AFTER THE WAR
  Dec 31, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 18: VS THE IMPURE 2
  Dec 31, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 17: VS THE IMPURE 1
  Dec 30, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 16: VS WINGED HEROES FINAL
  Dec 30, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 15: VS WINGED HEROES 3
  Dec 29, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 14: VS WINGED HEROES 2
  Dec 29, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 13: VS WINGED HEROES 1
  Dec 29, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 12: HERO ARMY
  Dec 29, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 11: GATHERING OF THE LEADERS
  Dec 28, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 10: HAIL EMPRESS
  Dec 28, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 9: ABOUT THE HERO WEAPON
  Dec 28, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 8: THE MANIPULATOR
  Dec 27, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 7: FRIENDSHIP
  Dec 27, 2015
• [RRCS] CHRISTMAS PRESENT
  Dec 24, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 6: FIRST NIGHT
  Dec 24, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 5: MARRIAGE?
  Dec 23, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 4: ERINA NIGHTSHADE
  Dec 22, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 3: A TALK WITH THE EMPRESS
  Dec 22, 2015
• S2 CHAPTER 2: A HARD BATTLE
  Dec 21, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• zombiebunnyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story got popular fast and theres a reason why.
• EnsiGRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Considering this was your first story, you did remarkably well. The grammar mistakes are hardly noticeable and the pacing of the story is fine. Really hope you decide to continue this in the future if not immediately :D Anyways, thanks for the story and I wish you the best in any future projects.
• Otaku2549Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  i don't have a word to describe this awesomeness, it's exactly what i'm trying to find
• BarakielRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I wanst even going to say anything, but thought that I should do so in respect for the author, and as thanks. I really liked this story. Its simple, yet it attracted me. I thought why I liked this and discovered something. I dont have idea. Maybe because it was simple and I needed something light to read. This was the closest I could get understanding myself. I enjoyed it, and was very good for a first story. All this big mess of words is just a message for the author, Glossalia. Thank You for your work!
• shattenRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  for the most part the only complain I have about this story is that I get caught up with the chapters too fast so keep up the good work
• herbin45Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I feel like you have taken a quest to defeat the demon lord and made it into a romance comedy although it might just be me who thinks that.
  It has a nice story but i feel like you are rushing it and should be taking it a bit slower.
  The grammar is good and i don’t think i’ve encountered a lot of mistakes.
  The characters are complex except a few who’s cliché.
  i liked the style and wish for you to continue with this story.
  It got a lot deeper in these new chapters and it’s a bloody masterpiece i recommend it to anyone who likes romance and comedy and drama.
• FriskynipsRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  If you're looking for a hugely detailed and in depth ff then this probably isn't for you. However if you're looking for a fun little read then check this out.
  I think this story is kinda cute in the sense that it throws away the limitationa that angry reviewers put on to "harem in a new world" type fictions. It's clear the other knows he wants a big goofy harem and he you know what he does? He's going to do it... and he's going to do it big. What's that? You're tired of mc being op and having beautiful girls doing crazy things to get his attention? THEN HIT THE ROAD JACK
• CreeperTheReaperRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  If he gets summoned every time he saves a world why not just not save it.
• saoRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Come on guys, why dislike G4merSylver, he seem like a nice guy.. and once again.. don´t hate, like my comment instead if you just have to push a button haha
  btw, could you please correct the grammar, it would really help making this story readable.. since it docent have any flow at all!!! anyway, if we don´t consider the lack of flow in this story i gott say Glossalia, i like it! it´s unique but at the same time fucked up, like how many heroes did get summoned, you mentioned six heroes a couple of times but only told us about three..
  forget about the last part, my fault..  after rereading those parts that mentioned the amount of heroes a couple of times.. i understood it better, my fault for not doing that before haha
  #currently#at#chapter6
• ElectricIcecreamRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Style
  You take an old concept (hero summoning) and allow the story to have the same aura as Death March and Magi's Grandson (easygoing, almost slice of life), which is nice to see. What separates those stories from your own is the speed at which the story moves along. I don't believe the MC has stayed anywhere for more than a few days, which amounts to roughly two or three chapters (with the exception being his stay on the ice).
  Slow the pacing, add in more world building; adjectives are the spices of writing. Give a more in-depth explanation about the situation around the world, tell the stories behind the king and queen, explain what makes each of the demon sisters who they are. Maybe write a few paragraphs about what he saw while running from the human country to the demons' capital. In ch 1 you describe the palace/fortress somewhat, but the demon palace get's hardly any words at all. Is there any difference between the lifestyle of humans and demons?
  Story
  Like I've already said, the story feels rushed, and I'm obviously not the only one who thinks that. My suggestion is to make more scenes where the characters interact and extend the ones you already wrote. You tend to rush straight to the main point, get the characters to exchange words (at no great length) and then make one of them leave (most often the room).
  What you want to do is not program where you find the shortest and most efficient way to get to the end, you are building a skyscraper where a fragile foundation will make the building collapse after it reaches a certain height. Build a stronger foundation by explaining things like how his powers work, what weapons he uses, what the area looks like where the people written about are in. What you lack most severely right now is world building.
  Characters
  Give me something that makes me like the MC for who he is, how he thinks, his personality and his morals. Something more than what you have so far given us. Why should Frith just go with the flow? Why ha