Can an elder lich become an adventurer?

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Status

Hiatus

Author

PleaseLaugh

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• the_random_userRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I thought it was alright. the the overpowered lich consept is okay and not terribly done. iv read very few books were the main motivation is bordom (Usually its something like taking over the world of saving your family).
  I suppose my main issue with what you've written is the amount of commas littered throught what im reading.
  A way to fix this is to speed read through what you've written and remove anything that breaks the flow.
• SoufdeboefRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I did not enjoy reading this story so far. So much so that i only read the first 2 chapters of your story and then skimmed through the rest because i felt i had seen enough. And boy was i right.
  It feels like you just read an isekai novel and replaced the boy from the other world with a skeleton (wich then proceeds to become a boy).
  Even the story so far has followed the same cliché isekai path. Killing some random bandits, saving the main love interest, going to the adventurers guild.
  I understand that you wanted to spice things up by writing from the pov of an overpowered lich but it hasn't really worked so far.
  Altough i think its a bit too early to say this. This story isn't going to be a succes if you keep following the clichéd rails you have been using until now.
  My advise to you would be to try to stand out from the crowd by surprising the readers with an interesting development, plot twist or characters.
  I hope you can make something amazing.