Can a holy hero be born from such a person?
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Description
Its a story about a young man name Azumi with her master Princess Alfin living in a fantasy world, can they fight off againts the oppression from various noble, chruch and sometime even their supporters?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Azumiazmee94
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 36
- Views
- 76,732
Chapters(182 total)
- Chapter 43: The third group activity part 2Aug 2, 2019
- Chapter 42: The third group activity part 1Aug 2, 2019
- Chapter 41: Splitting upAug 2, 2019
- Chapter 40: Duke Hiaccio familyAug 1, 2019
- Chapter 39: The three groupAug 1, 2019
- Chapter 38: Mrs KirthigaAug 1, 2019
- Chapter 37: Duke HiaccioAug 1, 2019
- Chapter 36: MesembryanthemumJul 31, 2019
- Chapter 35: ResolutionJul 31, 2019
- Chapter 34: That nightJul 31, 2019
- Chapter 33: Music and MagicJul 31, 2019
- Chapter 32: confronting the slave merchant part 3Jul 30, 2019
- Chapter 31: Confronting the slave merchant part 2Jul 30, 2019
- Chapter 30: Confronting the slave merchant part 1Jul 30, 2019
- Chapter 29: DepartureJul 30, 2019
- Chapter 28: Slave merchantJul 29, 2019
- Chapter 27: Making an A grade magic coreJul 29, 2019
- Chapter 26: Mr FeiJul 29, 2019
- Chapter 25: Magic core and magic stoneJul 29, 2019
- Chapter 24: System IJul 28, 2019
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Community Reviews(2)
- ZachTalonnRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5The story is great and seems to be on a good path but there is dire need for a proofreader. If you can get past the grammer the story still has plenty of potential to be great.
- SlaughterRoyal Road★★ 1.5The text is stilted. Words are left out. Sentence structure is awkward. It reads like not only is this the authors first story, but he/she is writing it in a language they are not totally fluent in. Here is an example from the first page.
"You know, with the pace you are going, you can actually outsmart most noble in higher education , if only I can persuade you and other to enter Athena academy" Alfin sigh sadly but Azumi quickly replied that it have more demerit as of now due to him being a little short temper when confronting a no good noble as he will most likely "lashed out"