Can a holy hero be born from such a person?
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Description
Its a story about a young man name Azumi with her master Princess Alfin living in a fantasy world, can they fight off againts the oppression from various noble, chruch and sometime even their supporters?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Azumiazmee94
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 36
- Views
- 76,732
Chapters(182 total)
- Chapter 123: The mother and the fire birdSep 5, 2019
- Chapter 122: Queen Zanariah and Mother TheresiaSep 5, 2019
- Chapter 121: People's perspectiveSep 5, 2019
- Chapter 120: RumourSep 5, 2019
- Chapter 119: Arrive back at the capitalSep 4, 2019
- Chapter 118: Going back to the capital part 7Sep 4, 2019
- Chapter 117: Going back to the capital part 6Sep 4, 2019
- Chapter 116: Going back to the capital part 5Sep 4, 2019
- Chapter 115: Going back to the capital part 4Sep 3, 2019
- Chapter 114: Going back to the capital part 3Sep 3, 2019
- Chapter 113: Going back to the capital part 2Sep 3, 2019
- Chapter 112: Going back to the capital part 1Sep 3, 2019
- Chapter 111: Before leavingSep 2, 2019
- Chapter 110: ADASep 2, 2019
- Chapter 109: Glimary interrogation part 2Sep 2, 2019
- Chapter 108: Glimary interrogation part 1Sep 2, 2019
- Chapter 107: 1st day of the month of fall 1299Sep 1, 2019
- Chapter 106: Last chance?Sep 1, 2019
- Chapter 105: Mesembryanthemum orphanage part 2Sep 1, 2019
- Chapter 104: Mesembryanthemum orphanage part 1Sep 1, 2019
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Community Reviews(2)
- ZachTalonnRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5The story is great and seems to be on a good path but there is dire need for a proofreader. If you can get past the grammer the story still has plenty of potential to be great.
- SlaughterRoyal Road★★ 1.5The text is stilted. Words are left out. Sentence structure is awkward. It reads like not only is this the authors first story, but he/she is writing it in a language they are not totally fluent in. Here is an example from the first page.
"You know, with the pace you are going, you can actually outsmart most noble in higher education , if only I can persuade you and other to enter Athena academy" Alfin sigh sadly but Azumi quickly replied that it have more demerit as of now due to him being a little short temper when confronting a no good noble as he will most likely "lashed out"