Calforn Chronicles (Original)

Self-Published

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Description

With the world in a senseless haze, the Forgotten and the Digits live under the thumb of the Government and Bankers.

When there are world shattering discoveries on the moon, agencies working in the dark see infinite opportunities.

When one engineer from the lower classes breaks through the societal mold, repercussions follow. The chain of events his incarceration began will affect the entire solar system, if not the universe.

Cover Image by Harkale Linaihttps://www.deviantart.com/harkale-linai

Cover Emblem by Kellericahttps://www.deviantart.com/kellerica

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Falbelo

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 38
Views: 14,657

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

Alex MRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The No Names starts quickly, and maintains a fast pace throughout. I like the world, and how the disjointed society is represented. Look forward to seeing where it goes.
--To the author: I recommend you touch up your synopsis. In my opinion, it doesn't do the story justice. (A really quick fix that will make a big difference, starting two of three paragraphs with 'When' is a bad idea.)
JPwritesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I am a sucker for sci-fi, and this story ticks my boxes. The narrative is deep and the author knows how to maintain an engaging flow in his prose.
Advanced Review incoming once I get in deeper.
NotoriousRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style 4/5
The author's biggest shortcoming in my opinion. Weird phrasing and words used repeatedly sometimes break immersion and mess up the flow of the story. Sometimes.
Character 4,5/5
Unique and relatable, if somewhat one-sided. Rational thoughts and responses, as well as solid and consistent characters overall.
Story 5/5
Easily the strongest aspect of this story and the reason it earns its 5 stars overall. A unique sci-fi tale in an original yet realistic universe that could satisfy even the most demanding fans of the genre. A dystopian tale that will tickle you in all the right places then slap you across the face. A fantasy world so far from the real that reveals so much about human nature.
Grammar 5/5
No mistakes I could spot with my limited knowledge. Praise the Javvs.