Burning bright [progression fantasy]

Self-Published

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Description

Millennia of desperate war against her father has left Lucifer Morningstar a burnt out husk.

Join her in a new world as she looks for a new therapist, grows her already godlike power and maybe falls in love.

Also there will be lots of war. Like a lot.

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This story has queer representation, so if youre not into that ; rip bozo

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Veronica

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 472
Views: 127,316

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Community Reviews(6)

CyclopsSlayerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I have truly enjoyed this excellent story.
I love the characters, vibrant and expressive. Even that quirky pervert of a dragon. The weariness is palpable in the early chapters. Slowly becoming almost playful. Well done!
The grammar seems perfect to my eye with no errors that have called out to me.
The only 'issue', and it is a very minor one, is until now the story is more slice-of-life and except for small hints it has lacked any solid goal. But, now war has been declared and lines drawn in the ether. Golden blood will be spilled, and Gods will die. But will old acquantances return?
We entered with the Prologue, and now have nearly exited the Introduction.
Well worth the read, and I cannot wait for more!
MapleSyrpRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is so far everything I enjoy in a story; strong female lead, enjoyable action scenes, some nice foreshadowing that the world may be more than it appears. My only fear with the MC as strong as she is is the story being breezed through feeling like theirs not any tension. That the world just end up being a theme park for the MC rather than an interesting story driven world the the MC lives in. I'm excited for more Chapter.
Sentient_SockRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I’ve read an OBSCENE amount of novels here on this site. Like, I can’t even track how much I’ve read. I think I’ve gone through 200+ novels, maybe more, over the years. But this has got to BE one of the best one’s I’ve read. Like, legitimately so, it is outstanding and incorporates some of may favorite ‘tags’. Before I get to my justifications, I’d honestly recommend you read it, as going into this novel thinking that it was like the others… just blew my mind.
Style -
Outstanding. 5/5. It doesn’t stray away from the general power fantasy that a majority of this site’s viewer base wants, yet still it is SO MUCH MORE! It tackles quite a few topics that—looking into more deeply—gives this story a purpose other than simply being enjoyed. (Although it is, of course, meant to be—At least I did.).
From what I have read, it seems to have a healthy dose of the following: Breaking chains/personal freedom, depression and the mental state associated with it, what may be a tiny about of same sex lovies~, and really just anything that has to do with one’s self.
You can just feel that it is soo much more, and it shows in every aspect. It makes you feel sympathy, hatred, joy, sadness, and at times even unease.
Story -
5/5. The premise is amazing—completely separate from what people have become accustomed to. I don’t want to spoil anything here, but even with my limited knowledge on some subjects, I still feel the attention to detail put into the story. From what seems to be lore, like the scars on the shoulders and form/name, to the development of powers and divinity. It all is just great! And it is even paced incredibly well, being slow enough for detailed povs and scenes, yet fast enough to progress the plot.
Grammer -
5/5. Nothing wrong that I can find. And great word choice.
Character -
5/5. Each character has a surprising amount of detail, most notable that of the MC and characters that we normally get POVs from. Despite being so powerful, the MC still feels human in that she
ThcooksterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I honestly didn't know what to expect when I started reading this, but it was not this! Amazing MC, unique, and quality writing. Definitely give it a read!
The story follows Lucifer, after an overwhelming victory against her creator and father. Flung from that world, she travels through the void, slowing losing herself, until she comes across a star and a curious world.
The story begins as what could be considered slow, but it is definitely needed to build the "world" and understanding of the MC. Lucifer has depth to her that is rarely seen on this platform, and I feel her joy and pain in each chapter. I am loving watching this immortal being interact with space rocks, care for a marble,
accidentally create sentient life,
and get integrated in a game-like system.
I look forward to seeing her grow and heal, as well as adventure on with the handsomest marble on this side of the universe.
Minor grammar errors that don't take away from the readers experience(spelling and punctuation).
The writing itself is amazing! Ideas flow well, and the dialogue feel very natural. The author creates a clear picture of the surroundings, but not overly so that it takes away from the story.
bakafennekRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is a weird mashup of Background storys, that somehow works well. Probably the most OP character to Isekai that ever was. Even thou, maybe not technically Isekai. But it's good! I'm not so fond of op main characters, but here it fits. Brings old trauma with it, and being an "old monster" so casually and in character feels good.
My only complain is the pacing, wich could be better half of the time.
Also. I need more chapters!
BedwigRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The grammar is ok. There are some minor typos such as small case 'i's, or using we'll instead of well. Other than those there haven't been any other grammar errors that I could tell.
The story from where I am is pretty standard so far, with an OP MC and her OP pet and her pet rock. Haven't been any big worldbuilding so far, which makes sense. The story is also told from multiple different POVs, sometimes changing in the middle of a chapter. The author always signals when there's been a POV change.
The characters are somewhat fleshed out. MC is traumatized and recovering, and that's been most of her character so far, except some sprinkling of humour and amusement. The main side character's personality doesn't feel as concrete yet, but there's back story to her already, so that helps.
Overall the story's pretty standard so far, with a slight twist to it.