Bundao

Self-Published

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Description

A garden-variety rabbit accidentally steps upon the path of cultivation. Follow Xiang Tuzi as she learns the ins and outs of being something far more than your average everybun.

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Status
Completed
Year
2023

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
48
Views
43,418

Chapters(65 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • ZagarothRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Despite the short first chapter, we already have a good feel for the main character, understand her basic situation, and have been given some good samples of the author's humor and style. His writing is clean and clear and definitely has a personal 'voice' to it.
    It entertained me and I am looking forward to more. What else can you ask for? :)
    Updating to the last chapter I've read. I am still enjoying it just as much, though I have a small critique now: Certain sections feel like they skim over too much time. I would like to see those areas fleshed out more, it would make some advancements feel more earned.
    However, the author is doing the writathon, so I can see not wanting to be hung up on parts instead of moving forward, and there is room to come back later and edit more after the writathon is ended.
  • CalaventeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Good story, well written.
    I contains the joys and tragedies that makes an attaching story.
    the world starts simple, like any (unusual) cultivation story, and then you learn that the world is darker than expected.. then it becomes heavy..
    You feel attached to the characters, and it's good.
    well, I mentionned it's fast-paced... yes it is ! This author knows how to use ellipses to fast-forward;..
    .. until it isn't. Just be warned, Author has a tendency to like pregnancies... BUT... isn't that normal for a Bunny-based MC ???
    for those having had babies.. it's reminiscing...
    for those that don't have any... well, you might learn a trick or two, demystify or unlearn a thing or two... I think it's pretty accurate :)
  • luda305Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    It's about what you see on the synopsis.  But it's a complete story and you zoom right through it, something all too rare for these types of stories.
    That said, there's a lack of tension at time.  The protagonists seem to always be just strong enough for there next big bad, and the final boss fight is anticlimatic, as the protagonist notices as she breaks the fourth wall a bit.
    Also, to be clear, something like 20% of this story is about pregnancies, which only get increasingly convoluted over time, including a pair of mothers and a pair of daughters all giving birth to triplets in the course of the same one hour (or something like that), and all contraception failing and everyone getting pregnant (or something like that).