brian's note book

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

cloaked poet

• A grieving dream
  May 5, 2022
• Stagnating
  Oct 4, 2020
• Vtubers?
  Oct 2, 2020
• A poem for fun
  Sep 30, 2020
• Un-experimental poem
  Aug 9, 2020
• Experimental poem
  Aug 9, 2020
• Birthday poem
  Aug 2, 2020
• A birthday poem
  Jul 18, 2020
• Young soldier girl
  Jul 10, 2020
• Grey (poem duel)
  Jul 10, 2020
• The pirate
  Jul 10, 2020
• The wayward wizard
  Jul 9, 2020
• A party
  Jul 3, 2020
• Despair, a poem duel entry
  May 29, 2020
• Bravery
  May 27, 2020
• Sleepy time poem
  May 27, 2020
• Fakes
  May 19, 2020
• Poem request from discord: Deviant and Alter Sky
  May 18, 2020
• The meaning of freedom
  May 18, 2020
• i was bored so i wrote
  May 13, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• AjnaranRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  You don't see things like this on RRL.
  I like new things. And I like shinny things.
  I don't like things that are shinny and new at the same time, though.
  Not bad. It would be good if you separate it in chapters, though, I just skimmed through many of it but I liked some of what I read. Good job.
• MochaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Style
  It's so edgy that I cut myself on it. That's all I can say. It is legitimate poetry all the way throughout. There's a few odd one liners and poems that don't rhyme at all, but it flows very nicely.
  Despite your insistence that the lower ones are worse, it feels okay all throughout. I actually prefer the lower ones.
  Story
  There is no story. This is a string of poems. However, each poem seems to follow somewhat of a theme and several themes are touched upon. That's enough for 5 stars in story for poetry from me.
  Grammar
  Grammar is a bit rough, especially in the poems in the lower sections. However, I can't really tell whether it's intentional or not at some points. Like bad grammar and spelling with poetry is sometimes a stylistic choice or to help things flow better. -1 star I guess.
  Character
  I honestly have no idea how to judge character on a poetry story. 5 stars for the author's character I guess. He did write 40k words worth of poetry and posted it online for all to see.
  Overall
  4.5 stars overall I say. A hearty amount of poetry to read and very hard to read in one sitting. I will be back later and I will bring more people to this.
• AllemoneRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I'll start off by being honest. I wasn't a huge fan of poetry up until now. Having said that, this is definitely something. The overall message is something I don't really understand. However, I can tell just how much effort you put into this. My only real problem is the length. If you plan on writing a sequel or something similar (and I hope you do) I'd recommend keeping it a bit shorter. People on here may get turned off by the length, and might not be willing to get to the meat of the poem. Regardless, great job. I look forward to more of your work.