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My life is but a code waiting to be decoded. With numbers and letters, I will protect earth with my creation...I will tame those that wish to oppose me, destroy those that hurt my family and erase anyone who angers me!

Dropped due to losing interest in this novel, I added too many things without any substance to support it.

Might update in the future but from now, I will work on a new novel.

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gary0044187Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Generally I am not a fan of OP MCs but the tone of the story and the difference in character design was sufficient to make this very enjoyable. I really like the "hack the world" concept and that was left just vague enough to not trip any of my BS meters. Very enjoyable story with many interesting characters. Best of luck to the Author.

PeppermancerRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

This story has a lot of potential, but it has one critical flaw. It moves too fast. I think you would have to triple how many chapters are out, maybe even quadruple, before I thought there was enough writing done to fully encapsule what happens. You clearly have a plan for your story, but you rush it SO much. Things just happen, and then they're done and gone, with no space to understand what happened. Characters are introduced, and then not spoken about for 5 chapters or more. Chapter titles are misspelled. You call characters the wrong pronouns for their gender just suddenly and out of no where. You don't spell people sames correctly or consistently. But most important, you don't spend enough time on the impactful moments. He just met his future selves for the first time, and the whole meeting is only what, 3 paragraphs long? Maybe? When did he start learning cooking? Why is he suddenly madly in love with Emma? How the hell did he get so rich before all this? What is the point of all these items he's making? What are their personalities, and what are they doing? WTF is his crafting system? Why are you writing basic phrases in Binary? How the hell did he know his mother was on that planet? What is trancedance and why was it not explained before? What is the joker? What is the VOID? I have so many questions, and who knows, maybe you answered them. But because you don't spend the time to just go over everything you've written, correct the little mistakes, and spend time to let your readers absorb the info, I can't tell if you answered them. Like, who the hell is Rolf? When did he appear? Why is he a brat? Since when was Ace raising him? What happened to Viktor and Rain? What is up with Jonathan after his suicide attempt? I'm just so confused. If you took your time, and answered these little niggling things, I'd give this story a much higher rating. But it's just so rushed and confusing, that I can't. Which sucks, because I really do feel like there is a great story t

endoriaRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

It is very hard to follow what is actually happening. The writing is erratic and disconnected and the story is rather boring. Reads a lot like wish fulfillment with an OP MC and combined with bad writing it is not worth the time to read it.

Branch Adventurers Guild [Dropped]

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