Born of Valar

Self-Published

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Description

Waking up with no concrete memories, Tyr finds himself thrown into a bizzare world of mythical beings, monsters and magic. He must find his role in the grand scheme of the realms while trying to prevent Ragnarok.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Dardin22

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 12
Views: 7,373

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Community Reviews(2)

WrongThinkRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I liked it. Pretty interesting. Best strength is it's world building. Characters are fairly unique and start to grow fairly quickly. Three dimensional characters, a robust world and the start of a promising lore. This author is one to keep an eye on as he grows and hones his craft.
DragonicPlagueRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Overall I he concept behind the story is great. The execution of it could use some work, but that obviously can come in time as you get used to writing. In particular, the story seems a bit more rushed than most normally would be. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it can be when it feels like details are being glossed over. On top of that, dialogue between characters can be a bit tricky at times, best thing to do there is to keep in mind who exactly is talking and picturing them saying whatever it is you want them to say. A 5 year old probably isn't going to use large words as an example. I also noticed a tendency to have long paragraphs, I'd suggest adding line breaks just to make it a bit easier to read.
All in all, this story seems really promising to me and I hope you continue it for a long time.