Born in the Animal World
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
One minute Ann was watching a video, the next time she was part of it.
She found herself hanging in the air with her head on one side.Only receding bushes and two fluffy lion cubs were in sight.
From now on, there is only one thing to do -- live.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Y W mmmm
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 178
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Dragon_LoverRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story follows Ann, a used-to-be human turned into a newborn lion cub. She starts her journey being carried in her mother's jaws, with her siblings fumbling about. A simple but good solid start. For those wanting a reincarnated/reborn as an animal story this is for you.
Pros:
Unique idea, not a very common premise of reincarnated as an earth-animal.
Lioness reincarnation, very cool! Hard to find, if found at all. They are usually forever on hiatus or abandoned.
Cons:
Font/text color is too light, it causes the reader to look really hard to see the word on screen if they are in dark mode. Perfectly fine on light mode.
Chapters are too short!
Currently on hiatus (hope the story picks up soon)
Style score: The words get cut off on some of the paragraphs, font color too light, other than that style is good! 4/5
Story: Very unique. 5/5
Grammar: Sometimes feels a little bit off, but might be because of me being on dark mode and trying to read the text. 4/5
Character score: Not much is known about this characters personality yet, nor her character design. Love that she is a lion, will give a good rating to start off. 5/5
Pretty interesting story, hope it goes far on this site and gets lots of chapters along the way!