Boku No Halo Academia: Rising Conflict (Complete)

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Narrowly escaping the Fall of Reach at the hands of the Covenant Aurdel-009 found himself on the UNSC Chariot of Fire bound towards Earth, but with ship's slipspace drive malfunctioning he's forced to bail ship and finds himself crash landing the planet. Unfortunately for him the Earth he found himself on wasn't his at all. Instead, it was one stuck in the late twenty first and with problems of its own. With no way home Aurdel must try and shed his past as a Spartan, adapting to this new world filled with proliferated superpowers known as 'quirks' and taking on the titles of a pro-Hero and a teacher. But with the constant tirade of critics bashing his methods, Villains running rampant in the streets and devastating conflict looming on the horizon he'll find that he's bitten off more than he can chew.(A Halo and My Hero Academia crossover)

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Status: Completed
Year: 2022
Author: Iowaman24

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 286
Views: 168,905

Chapters(60 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

yoboihaloloverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
at first, I thought it was just a generic fanfiction but as I continued to read through it I now find myself on the newest chapter and a five-star rating, this is an amazing story and how you come up with all of this is just mind-boggling. Keep going man
KetchupSplatterSpecialistRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Honestly, it's been a few days since I've read the last chapter, so I'm a little fuzzy on a few things. However, I saw there wasn't a review yet and felt that it was good enough for someone to endorse it a little, so here I am.
Talking about the general feeling it gives me, it actually feels like Beware of Chicken to an extent. Now, I'm not saying that it's a carbon copy and that if you liked one of them that you would like the other. However, its style so far (chappy 14) is very similar. Both of them have slice of life vibes and use progression plot lines (aka powering up physically and mentally in general versus trying to resolve a specific crisis that would complete the story... Though, Mother of Learning was a progression fantasy as well. It's just that MoL introduced an end goal towards the end, so its feeling changed... anyways...).
The main difference between this story and Beware of Chicken, I believe, is the pacing. (Besides themes, of course.) Beware of Chicken is much slower paced and focuses on multiple characters and their progression. Boku no Halo Academia, however, focuses almost entirely on the spartan that crosses over into the [insert long anime name] universe. Which, is beneficial in that it allows for a more seamless transition between scenes and plot lines. The draw back is that it makes less content.
...I definitely like the style. Though, I think it really depends on a person's preferences. Some writers like to focus on world building. But me, I really like characterization and drama to be the main focus. It's really common in fan fictions since the world is already constructed so much. But, I've seen some writers like Azureblade focus more on world building. (Though, Azureblade also likes the drama.)
The story (which I'm defining as the philosophy, conflict, and lesson the fiction aims to teach, along with its execution... Though, not all writers necessary aim to teach philosophy) I'm not super thrilled at the moment with. The Halo universe i
RightoMateRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Premise/expectation?
I saw the premise and thought it was extremely interesting, but I've seen plenty with interesting premises and wasted potential. This is not one of those.
Characters?
The characters act in believable ways whether they be Villain, Hero or civilian, the MC feels like an actual person (A person trained as a spartan would) and while they don't really commit many mistakes it's kinda what you'd expect from a supersoldier trained from a young age to be a perfect weapon, they think through their actions but not in a tedious way which clogs the story (thats not to say they will always be correct).
Style?
The style of this novel was something I found very engaging, we mainly follow the MC with short cutaways to other characters but without anything I would call filler. Details of the world are filled in without the character having to ask exposition dump side characters about it, they get their information organically from their environment, other characters, history from their own reality or their own deductions.
Grammar/spelling?
The grammar and spelling has some hiccups scattered throughout but isn't enough to break immersion or make it painful to read (Get an editor or just proofread a bit and you'll be golden).
Fights?
The fights are very well done and truly show the raw power a spartan would be capable of, that along with not making guns completely useless like we've seen a million times is very welcome. The fights are also more brutal than you would see is MHA, Aurdel is trained to kill and while he does use non lethal take downs they can range from knocked out from a blow to the back of the neck to blowing off someones legs, something that I find very entertaining when you get to see how criminals and villains would realistically react to someone who is basically a slightly less bloodthisty judge Dredd.
OP, balanced or underpowered?
Spartans are strong but they don't portray him as being completely unbeatable, there are situations (as would be exp
t2oRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Spartans are strong but, there is absolutely no evidence of them being as strong as the M.C. (aurdel). A simple YouTube search would show exactly how strong the strongest Spartans (gen-2 Spartans) are & how much of a strength & speed boost they would get from their armour.
We can also see how strong midoria is, it would be physical impossible for a spartan to knock out muscle man like he did.
Combat experience is not enough bridge the gap between a superhuman & an ultrahuman (with a strength and resilience quirk)
It would be like a feather weight running up on heavy weight, they are getting folded. (barring extraordinary circumstances)
So, please consider adding some explanation on why Aurdel is so strong.
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Also, what kind of fantasy universe is MHA in, where civilians (Japanese civilians) can open up a stall & sell m14 to passers by.. it's one of countries with extremely stringent gun laws out there...
this story is demanding too imagination & suspicion of disbelief to justify what's going on..