Blue Star Cultivator

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Description

An orphan from a big clan was maligned to live destitute in the outskirts of a mountain, but discovered a miracle that would change his life forever more. This a xanxia story about the journey of our gravity controlling mc from a weak individual to a powerhouse in the Aldora continent

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Nicholai lewis

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 363
Views: 528,504

Chapters(164 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

760snowsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Thanks so much for the book I'm pretty arkward every when writing so I'm not going to try to leave a sophisticated review. Please keep writing tho
Ricardo sandovalRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great work, like the pace of the story and the characters, a few grammar mistakes like xantia in the lead and i saw violent mountain instead of violet mountain in the begining chapers and stella mountain instead of stellar mountain in latter chapters.
Miss talk about treasures like you find in many xiantian stories like herbs and pills, there have been some but I love treasures :).
Simple and nice romance, curious about how the story will develop, I fell like its more important to keep regular updates for the long haul.
Keep up the great work, and dont let a few low rates affect you, think more about the happy readers.☺
themspicynoodlesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Is this novel dropped its been 1+ year since the last update, if it is can I adopt it?
John ChristiansonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
92 chapters is and it's pretty good, he has tried to stay away from most of the tropes that this genre has such as harem or being a overly brilliant genius while keeping a few that were basically required unless we want 1000 chapters of him power grinding.
RoxtRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The chapters vary in length quite a bit, and grammar could use a second pass but otherwise a solid start.
Beserker-boyRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
It’s not bad, a little fast with some holes, but not bad the concept itself is good so keep up with some small improvements fill in some holes and you’ve got yourself the start of a good wuxia, congrats 😊
LuxRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
This story is really dissapointing because at first I thought the story had a lot of potential. The whole trapped in the wilderness for years and only knowing training and combat made for a real interesting hook. I can understand how someone who didn't know anything about luxuries or relaxing and who is contantly fighting to the death with beasts could be a powerful warrior. Even the whole found a secret treasure that gives knowledge is fine with me but then the author just keeps going way to far. First there is the whole issue of how a kid who has no memory of living in a town is able to interact normally with people, read, knows about currency and address elders with proper etiquette. Second I get that in wuxia murder is more common but come on he murders whole groups of people and destroys tons of buildings and no one even questions it or asks for compensation for blowing up their buildings. Are there just no laws in these countries or what? If not why are there even countries. Even in wuxia killing people who are more than servents or slaves normally has some implications. Also this whole cultivation system is poorly made and its weird that elders who run the clans and are hundreds of years old are the same power level as core disciplines in thier twenties. I feel like the whole world is broken and doesn't work. It only exists to make the hero seem cool and strong but you can't even enjoy that because he has no personality and never has any trouble fighting. No characters have any depth and there interactions just boil down to "I talked to them for two seconds and am in love with them" or "fuck that evil guy". Plus all the combat is boring after having to read "he wasn't even in his eyes" and "I slashed from high-right to low-left" a hundred times. It's dumb and as powerful as gravity is at least other characters have a chance but once he can control time why does he even use anything else, just stop time and cut their heads off. No one else can even register th
JknottRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Your chapters are to short. The characters lack depth. Dont use lol in a descriptive. Sounds extremely dorky. Ask yourself would you say laughing out loud when you describe something. You repeat words and your sentence structure could use some work.