Bloody Mistakes
Self-Published
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Description
Evan Daniels. A name unknown to the world, at least, for now.
After experiencing one too many traumatic events, he finds himself whisked off to a world of supernatural beings he'd never imagined truly existed, now involved in a war he wanted nothing to do with. Isn't that a surprise? Too bad surprises are the one thing he hates.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- OminousAnomaly
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 2,311
Chapters(15 total)
- Chapter 15May 25, 2024
- Chapter 14May 18, 2024
- Chapter 13May 11, 2024
- Chapter 12May 4, 2024
- Chapter 11Apr 27, 2024
- Chapter 10Apr 20, 2024
- Chapter 9Apr 13, 2024
- Chapter 8Apr 6, 2024
- Chapter 7Mar 30, 2024
- Chapter 6Mar 9, 2024
- Chapter 5Mar 2, 2024
- Chapter 4Feb 24, 2024
- Chapter 3Feb 17, 2024
- Chapter 2Feb 10, 2024
- Chapter 1Feb 6, 2024
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Community Reviews(1)
- betoRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Bloody Mistakes has been weird for me, because the writing and overall style is semi-pro or even professional, which is awesome for any story on this site!
However it also feels like the author's first take in worldbuilding, things don't add up and constantly breaking the reader's suspension of disbelief.
The characters are also a point of contention, because there is effort in fleshing them out, but again there are these moments when they don't act accordingly (probably to drive the story forward).
Too many in-world inconsistencies counteract the very good writing style. Could use a rewrite or rethink of the story, and how to portrait characters and situations.