Bloody little Monster

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Description

A young catkin finds herself stranded on an island without any memories of how she got there, or who she was before.

With a lack of humans in the area and monsters looking to turn her into a quick snack, she has to do everything in her power to survive or face being brutally mauled to death.

Thankfully, the strange System that she woke up with seems to be just the thing that can let her survive, and turn the tables on the monster, giving her the chance to turn the tides of survival and trample over the world with impunity.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Hymns

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADFEMALE LEADNON-HUMAN LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
461
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70,153

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • CrywolfsevenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Honestly all around I have no complaints. I truly enjoy this story so far and I can’t wait to see where it goes from here. I especially like the innocent murder machine getting scolded for poor word choice lol.
  • DumplingJrRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Its a pretty good book lots of dead things and animals so far this is as of chapter 5
  • HellscytheRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Grammar is nice.
    Story is pretty easy-going.
    Characters aren't really fleshed out. Although I understand that the side-characters that has appeared so far are only meant to last one or two chapters, I would still prefer some 'life' to them. I don't really mean to complain, but the only thing I can remember about the members of Raven is that the female in the team is having a sexual relationship with two of the men. Nothing else that has been written about them so far has left a lasting impression on me.
  • hsteinvallRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The chapters are really short, progression is needlessly fast. It seemed like a fun but very trivial read. I would rate it at 2.5 of 5, but since RR's rating is wacko I gave it a 4.
  • bloody4youRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    have gone through 9 chapters so far and no glaring mistakes in grammar so far looks great and i look  forward to more :D
    enjoyed it so for, hope you will write more :)
  • TanhaleviRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    It is the "kinda-entertaining" story of an overpowered catgirl able to grow in power extremely fast and who is not completely sane mentally.
    I was interested, after all who doesn't like op protagonists and cute cat girls?
    Unfortunately, although the novel's grammar was more than decent, the author writing style is not the greatest and the story feels more like different daydreams tied together than a true connected story.
    The catgirl goes shopping. The catgirl travels. The catgirl is attacked. The catgirl argues. The catgirl goes cray-cray.
    The chapters felt disconnected and because of it there is also no character development.
    The catgirl may have matured during the chapters, but we do not see growth.
    We are told what she thinks and what she does, but the "why" or "how" feels ethereal because we never dig deep in what she cares for, how does she view the world, etc.
    Other characters might be mentioned once and then disappear.
    They appear, they do their job (be it acting evil enough to appear 3 chapters after to be kilked without ever really knowing much about them or simply making an appearance for 3 seconds and not being met anymore) and they disappear.
    A girl get saved? We do not meet her anymore.
    The Male Lead (?) 's family? They literally appear once.
    The seer? We literally only know that she can see from the distance.
    The monsters terrorizing the kingdom? We only know she killed, no more informations are given.
    We could continue with examples like those ones, but it would be rude and useless.
    What I want to say is that... it's not a good story.
    As a novel it's bad, no doubt.
    As an album of scenes created by the author, however it would not be too bad.
    I believe that, maybe, taking those chapters as a skeleton on which to build a better novel would not be bad.
    Writing it in a better way, focusing a bit more on the events and characters and doing less timeskips might make it more readable and more enjoyable.
    It is, however, just my opinion and I am not an expert