Black Hope
Self-Published
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Description
A short story about Adam and theevents that have changed his destiny ..
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Sakata_Gintoki
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 258
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5With a title like Black Hope, it did seem like this would be a bleak short story and it is. The prose and narration get a bit awkward in spots and the focus on telling does weaken the piece. The strange thing is that the ending just sort of happens and implies suicide but not enough to warrant the content warning tag as it just happens. The short story is rather muddy in a way, trying to infer when it should declare its actions and show the emotions more clearly.