(BL) System, WTF!

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I had died naturally  and I have no regrets in the age of 50 I'm thankful I saw my family, being successful and happy, so that's why there's no regret.

When my life is starting to fade away.

I heard a voice inside my head.

[System initiating a connection to the host, processing complete]

Huh?! Wait! What the?! SYSTEM?!WTF!

And my life fades away my soul was suck of a vortex, God what's happening!!!!

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • AlthayasRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is a re Jew after ten chapters. I am finding this Wuxia story of interest. But the grammar and the spelling are horrendous. I will modify the score if the writing is ameliorated, perhaps with the help of a beta reader.
  • Yukitora-J L WrightRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Yes, the writing isn't great and the story is rushed,p. The spelling and grammar need a lot of work as sometimes words are missing and the meaning isn't clear. But, I think this, if it had extensive rewrites, could be a really good comedy. The plot and story have potential and the characters of Riki and Systen 888 are a great foil for one another. Good try 👍🏾