Birth of Chaos

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Description

For a world to grow, things must change. So was a special child born into a stagnating world with her existence being fundamental to starting over and moving forward.

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Author's Note: This story was mostly written to make some kind of story for the image (the cover) I drew.

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2021
Author
Cyfue

Tags

FANTASYMAGICSHORT STORYHIGH FANTASYMYTHOS

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Rating
3.0/ 5.0
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1
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259

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The author created this after making the artwork, that is an interesting premise, but this feels more like the backstory of the character than any actual story. There is no plot, no real emotional element and it simply tells the supernatural origin of a character that gets no interaction. All those things make this piece a curiosity of sorts and not something which has impact on the reader.
  • luda305Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Not a bad short story.  Not much in the way of plot.  As the synopsis says, it's mostly a matter of describing the picture the author drew.  It's a bit like Genesis from the Bible in that way.  Less "here's a story," and more "here's what happened."  It may have been a bit melodramatic.
    Some of the grammar and sentence structure could use cleaning up. There were some parts that were awkward or difficult to read.
    The use of German to describe the titles of the Sovereigns was a bit hard to follow.