Beyond Truth

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[Summary is subject to change]

==Its time for me to admit that I'm no good writing a good-natured MC==

Azolos, a demon of unknown origins, rose to power soon after the thorough defeat of the previous Demon Lord; Narnegill. Within a matter of years, he had managed to seize a staggering amount of territories, reigning over half of Altra Vita. Azolos had already achieved the desires a mortal deemed impossible, be it wealth, power or women. Ruling over a seemingly impenetrable empire, nothing escapes his watchful eyes as he rules with stern, but often merciless, verdicts. After the revival of the Empire, Azolos set a new quest that will soon change the world. To make peace with other kingdoms... ...no matter what it costs, even if he has to kill innocents in the process.

=Thanks to Waffie for the awesome summary=

Author’s Note : Please forgive my crappy grammar, but please give this fiction a read before you actually drop it :)

1. This fic is more drama, comedy than action.

2. Featuring wimpy, weak heroine who will mature as the story progresses.

Rewritting in progress.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: exlaking

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 83
Views: 5,492

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

ErrantRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
People(in some of the reviews) have the wrong idea about some of the characters... They'll know if they read more.
I think this is a great story. Want counted most for me was that this is entertaining. Give it a try.
If you're into OP demon lord, you'll like this. The MC is mistaken as the previous vile demon lord. I think this part is cool.
ILoveAnimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Really solid story! Character development, story and writing is all really good. Can't really find any faults in this one. Nice long chapters and and story feels "real" : ) First few chapters were tiny bit confusing but after that story started running great.
You definitely have to follow this.
AldyrinRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I really wanted to like this story. It is well written! No significant grammar issues. Complex plot line, not 100% action. All good things for me.
That said, I ended up dropping this because I can't sympathize with the MC at all. From one scene to another his personality seems to completely change. He's tender in one, taking care of handicapped people, and then in the next he's facilitating the slaughter of innocents. It just doesn't make sense to me. I can't empathize with an inconsistent character. Which is frustrating since it seems like this story has a lot of potential, aside from this key problem.
SephiranRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
well im not a fan of stockholm syndrom harem baseds but also im not a fan of bricktagonist shoujos MC that as said above, go full retard and instead of making sure of facts they just believe every single info they get.
here we have a succubus with such syndrom, the elf who chose to keep being a conceited brat and a Shoujou wanna be dark elf.... i have a feeling that she will be the reason of another Human/Demon war just because she is as stupid as any unrealistic shoujo female lead...
Style 4/5
for once i find a pretty good style with the only problem of swaping PoV quite often and with no specification of who's PoV it is
Story 3/5
i feel like im reading one of those betray-betrayal novel books from the medieval times where everything can be white one moment and suddenly become black like being happy one moment and 2 weeks later the whole family is being sold by slave traders next...its that sort of vibe i get.
Grammar 4.5/5
One of the strongest points of this FF as one can fluidly read with no problems other than the sudden changes of PoV.
Characters 2.5/5
Well this is the least thing i found likeable from this story, at the beggining i thougth it would be great kind of Anti-Hero story but reading the last chapter ('She'") i cant like even the Mc Anymore:
Mc: Anti-Hero-Scumbag who fell in love with the poor unlucky elven maiden rescuing and in return all he gets? a big go fuck yourself why? because she is a shoujo wanna be female lead.
The harem is kinda not well stablished as this is too early but we got so far a succubus with Stockholm syndrome, a paratic/disabled elf gir with pretty hardcore "Ojou-sama" complex which i hate from the bottom of my heart (dont know her actual status after last chapter), and for the cherry on top of the poop pile we have *dramatic drum sound* INDEED THE MOTHER F***** Shoujo wanna be "UNLUCKY" Elf who is supposed to be cursed and will bring a great disaster which i can see it coming already as a war between demons and humans.
Why sh