Beyond the Horizon

Self-Published

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Description

A lonely girl meets with her online friends for the first time for a roadtrip.

Chapters(18 total)

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  • danny26284Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Wow, where do I start I have never heard anyone write on the concept of fulfilment is pain before and gods are empty and lonely well not as clear and well written as this. Orion power is obvious at the start and I’m sure he’ll be just as strong after his rebirth.
    style:
    The style is very descriptive in fact so if the best descriptions I’ve seen and If you’ve read the chapter you’ll know what I mean. Sometimes it can be abit too much and confusing but I think that’s the nature of your writing.
    grammar:
    let’s be honest is quite shocking the tense changes and the person changes (1st/2nd/3rd person) without need making it just confusing and unreadable.
    character:
    Orion who I assume is the mc is presented as some form of god/deity who is alone and bored and in result suffers but seems to be given a second chance to live life again, he tone of speech is rather strange and confusing and he does swear at times he’s made some jokes so far and seems to be a relatable character even with the godly status.
    even after just reading 1 chapter I still recommend greatly although I cannot speak for the rest of the book👍