Beyond Oblivion

Self-Published

Description

Beyond Oblivion, a wip novel attempting to write the strongest ability in all of fiction.

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I hate plot twistRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Okay, as the title say. Prologue is a master piece and one of the greatest, if not best opening I've read in this website thus far.
I seriously love it.
But that's where the problem is, the prologue is too good in my opinion, that the following chapters kind of fell short. They weren't really bad or anything, the prologue was just that good, in any case, I'm expecting the plot to slowly move in the prologues direction so I will keep reading it.
Mark JulianRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I got very curious about the world and what is happening in the story, the story is well written and has an interesting premise, the mc seems very well developed already and with different layers.
It was a bit confusing in the beginning though. The first 4 chapters feel like a prologue and it's basically just a grimdark monologue, but after that, everything kinda changes and the story starts to roll with a different tone, so I'm not sure what style is this, the story has a total different vibe in the beginning.
I would recommend a better blurb so we can understand a bit more about what the story is about, and keep a consitent style/tone for the whole story, I'm expecting to see more grimdark theme from now on.