Better Half

Self-Published

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Description

Everyone's got their demons ...

History teacher Kyle Saunders has a dark secret - he's host to a short-tempered, foul-mouthed parasite demon named Ryka. As if High School wasn't Hellish enough - with unruly students, angry parents and meddlesome colleagues - now he has to deal with a rebellious Ryka, who seems eager to take his possession to the next level. He's after more than just Kyle's soul ....

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Lil Doe

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 23
Views: 29,626

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AranH98Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
First of all, how does this not have any reviews and why have I only discovered it now!
Man oh man is this good. The spelling and grammar are very good. I've spotted 2 maybe 3 errors altogether after todays binge on this(like 40-50 odd chapters)
The way the story is written is a lil strange, consisting of chunks or snippets of their life over the years. It took a lot less time than I thought it would to get used to that, but the way it's written helps a bunch. And boy is it written good.
The main characters feel so fleshed out and real. The way they respond and interact with each other as well as other characters is done beautifully. They(MCs) are their own identities completely, regardless of sharing a body.
There isn't very much I don't like about this. Reading it, I have actually had to put my phone down and gush/squeal about the story. Not a very manly thing to do in my opinion, but daaaaaaamn is this good.
The ....steamy scenes..... are honestly very good too, better than I thought they would be. Most who try for them, butcher it, when they should just fade to black, but you do a phenomenal amount of justice to them.
The chapter lengths can vary in length from small glimpses into their lives, to full on episodes worth of happenings.
But all in all, fucking well done.
Please keep it up, this shit is fire.