Betrayal of the Dead

Self-Published

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Description

You've died.

For most that would be it.

The end.

A closed path.

But fate seems to have something else in store for you.

What if...

Through death...

You can become... stronger.

-System activation complete-

-System loading...-

-Death's betrayal.-

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Dyad

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.6/ 5.0
Followers
7
Views
2,259

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I loved the humor in the two first chapters (especially the AI), but that humor changed about halfway through chapter 3.
    The story flows really well, and if fast paced, but it lack cohesion in my opinion ( not only because of the comedy thing, but also because "blue boxes" are not consistent throughout).
  • KindahardbabyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The novel is right down my road. Good so far, got some great potential. Witty, crafty and diverse. Love the way that the author dips his fingers into many different professions and scenarios.
    Also the lack of perma-death is a sweet idea especially for a human MC, good plot device.