Betrayal (Magic school, fantasy, dystopian)

Self-Published

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Description

A girl's parents have been kidnapped. Her best friend has betrayed her. Her enemy has befriended her. There are spies everywhere in her magic school. She needs to save her parents before the enemies kill them and destroy the fantasy world. Who can she trust to help her?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: F.H.

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 2,130

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

elizalinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The setting and opening of this story are captivating. The teachers having animal names is an interesting touch—I'm not sure of the reason behind it, but it instantly helps me picture their appearance and possibly their personalities, which I find appealing. It's like a clever descriptive shortcut. The school itself seems to blend elements of magic and sci-fi, making it quite unique. The main character is already in hot water with the teachers and the principal—it sure didn’t take long! I’m excited to read the rest!
God of LiesRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
An intriguing setting and opening to a new story. The teachers have animal names - I don't know why, but it does give me an immediate insight into their look and maybe their personality which I like - a kind of descriptive shorthand. The school sounds like a mix of magic and sci-fi, which is also unusual. The character is already in trouble with the teachers and the principal - that didn't take long! Can't wait to see what she's done wrong...