Belli Mundi

Self-Published

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Description

Sam wakes up in a different world.

Here she discovers that there is a game-like system in place.

How will she survive this strange and dangerous world?

Will she be an unremarkable villager in this new world, or will she shake everything up wherever she goes.

A LitRPG where the MC does have an OP ability, but will grow slowly. No fighting dragons after the first day in a new world, so if you want such a MC, this won't be it.

The system has gotten a lot of inspiration from Azarinth Healer.

This is a first draft, so getting feedback to improve the story is appreciated. I might change the beginning later, as it might be a bit weak right now.

Updates every Friday.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Seaboircil

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 183
Views: 70,610

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Community Reviews(1)

FlexdachsRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story follows the protagonist, who is transported to another world filled with a system, where she gets involved with the local military (as hinted by the title).
In my opinion, the world is nicely set up. It has conflicts, it has potential in the known unknown and realistic politics. The protagonist is a bit bland and naive, as she is honest and direct to a fault, e.g. telling every stranger her whole personal information. As she and the side characters are still realistic written and there are increasing interactions with other people, it could still be attributed to a getting-to-know phase (even though some teammates are somewhat unlikeable). The system is an issue, which I find very distracting. Although I like to read litrpg, this system feels like a game system, as in it has the same limitation which smaller rpg games establish due to easier game design (slots).
It is a good read and I am interested to where the story is headed.