Being villian is great!!!
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You are always caught in regret and indecisionYou are always facing anxiety and supression
Always thinking why me!! What is wrong with me!!
Why you cannot be the centre of this world??Why you cannot surpass those born geniuses??Why you always have to be the last ?Why your wants are always ignored??Why you don't matter to this world anymore!??
Now,I will walk the path that no one treadI walk the path of utter humilation and regret
I will walk the path of being deathlessI will walk the path of madness and chaos
Even if I would be wrapped in twisted insanity!I am going to show you today what an decided mind can do to this upheveal led up world!!
If the world don't care about an insignificant charcater like me!Then I don't care about this multiverse or my sanity!
If you are worked off from the constant struggle of reality and want to relax this novel is for you!
Leave a comment!Review it! (Tell my mistakes!)And for more chapters donate!
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Olympus opus
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- 1.3/ 5.0
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- 1
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- 2,900
Chapters(6 total)
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- TealiciousTeaRoyal Road★★ 2.0Introduction
"it get downright absolute abhorrence for me when it came to the subject of sociology."
For this line alone, I would never raise my rating above a three. It is a personal matter but such things are important to this hobbyist reviewer.
A technical nightmare. The punctuation is a mess that has more in common with spaghetti than trying to make the writing clear to the reader.
For sheer boldness, and the interesting concepts played around with giving merit to the story. I may not agree with the views of the characters unless this is a very elaborate satire by the author. However, credit, where credit is due, there has been thought put somewhere. The potential of this author is clear.
Style
The first chapter is stylish. The rest is a painful read. Utterly lacking in style.
Story
I don't know, the writing needs a lot of editing. There is a story here, it is hard to work out what it is under the technical flaws.
Have you read Crime and Punishment by Dostoevsky? It popped into my mind while I was reading the main character go on a killing spree for reasons I didn't understand. It might be a fruitful source of inspiration and learning.
At the end of chapter five, my impression was simply a surprise that he had at some point a dragon.
Characters
The character descriptions are overly flowery, something I've done before and while an interesting exercise (and something that can be done effectively) is plain unneeded for the first two paragraphs of the second chapter.
I find the advice show don't tell to put too unclear and obvious for the most part. Here, however, I can say with confidence that no reader needs a detailed description of characters or their background explained to them within the first few paragraphs of the second chapter. I say this because the second chapter acts as what most first chapters do.
The first chapter is an interesting, if technically flawed, art piece. To put it more clearly, it is an appetiser or preamble.
On the actual relationship bet