Before It Shatters
Self-Published
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Description
Civil war shreds the land. The court priest meets with a state advisor to beg his intercession.
Additional content warning: Mild body horror
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- DruidX
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 208
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★ 2.0The prose and the action here is devoid of clarity in the context and the setting itself to really ground this piece in a way. It relies on making an emotional connection through flowery description and rather stilted dialogue, but it struggles to communicate. If this were more plainly written and laid out prior to trying to craft such lofty airs then it would probably be a lot more successful.