Beast God

Self-Published

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Description

A Supreme Being is unsatisfied with Earth's evolutionary progress and decides interfere, throwing the planet into hell.Follow Bennett as he tries to not only survive, but thrive in this familiar yet different world.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
DawsonB

Tags

FANTASYADVENTURE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
178
Views
82,150

Chapters(43 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • DusticulousRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Okay, man. I just found that this is also here, not only on Webnovel. Why are you not continuing this amazing novel? You WILL be tortured in my basement and you WILL be forced to make more if you do not add more chapters. Hell, stop with House of Cason if you need to, this one is completely original (if it isn't I must have a name) and a HELL OF A LOT BETTER THAN ALL YOUR OTHER STORIES!!
  • RandomNumbersRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The book has a good start. No obvious spelling errors, little grammar mistakes. ok mc, and one irritating character 4/5
  • mioRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    the problems;
    1. your grammar is often wrong, and you write some words as you hear them, not as they are written. i underlined you because it's not how i hear them. at all. makin it more confusing to read.
    2. you don't know the difference between your and you're.
    your means it belongs to you, it is yours.
    you're means you are. like you are a wolf, you are stupid... things like that.
    example; your book is good but you're bad at diferentiating 'your' and 'you're'.
    3. you write half-sentences often. like, you begin a sentence, and halfway there you add something someone says.
    example;
    Nodding her head in approval, "What do you think of your new class?"
    should be:
    Nodding her head in approval, she asked, "What do you think of your new class?"
    or
    Nodding her head in approval, "What do you think of your new class?" she asked.
    the good;
    1. interesting powersystem for the mc, though it has potential to grow too overpowered too quick, so look out for that.
    2. good world-building so far.
    3. the flow is good.
    4. characters are interesting, though for lily, she's a bit too chill with what happened... but that might just be me.
    5. and, last but not least, the story is great!