Beast Cultivating System

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Description

A woman felt her life didn't have meaning and was missing something, she envisioned a more exciting future in which she had a goal to achieve.Coincidentally, this came in the form a bolt of lighting which sent her into the newborn body of a spirit beast with True Dragon heritage, into the world of cultivation where the strong eats the weak. Whilst awakening inside an unfamiliar world and body, she was pondering her newfound situation a robotic noise interrupted her thoughts indicating that the beast cultivating system has activated.Bloodline purity? Legendary bloodlines? Talent?Her system can provide it all.Armed with the knowledge of being a race in which is hunted by other beasts for its bloodline or enslaved by other cultivators, she knew the only way to keep safe in this chaotic world is getting stronger.Dragon pic: https://lawrencemann.co.uk/portfolio_page/spitfyah/

I have posted this on web novel; https://www.webnovel.com/book/12432453405442605/Beast-Cultivating-System

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: dox991

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 750
Views: 468,986

Chapters(85 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

DragonightmareRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i love the story so far i always liked the idea of charectors that dont just change mentally over time but physically too like with creatures that change and evolve over time i also love the mc so far but i will admite she kind of needs a campanion besides the system(since the system has a personality based on hers) so far the charectors shes with seem to have no long term effects besides making the mc stronger like giving her technicess protecting her for a while or getting killed by her she needs a semi more constand peroson(or beast) also the passing can feel off at times especially with the latest chapters
Bluebloom25Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I just found this story and I could not put it down! I has a concept I haven't seen before and I greatly enjoy it! I can't wait for more!
Mikers992Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
(Treasure addict Dana is gone, thank god.)
So this is good if you like op MCs and cultivation, but this goddamn treasure addiction is seriously getting stupid and its turning more and more into a generic chinese cultivation novel.
This is turning less and less original with each chapter.
Eh me ged briRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I personally enjoy the novel you wrote it's interesting it just needs a few touch ups on the grammar and a few touch ups to the story and it would be a pretty good novel at least to me but to others it may not be good but just keep up the good work and have fun
KohrimRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story itself is kinda good. It feels a lot like other cultivation stories. You can REALLY feel the tropes tho.
Problem is every chapter is written as if someone read a nice story and then had to do a book report about it.
I will still keep reading I think.
Acolyte_of_cthulhuRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Its pretty good not much problems. The story progresses pretty quickly but not in a bad way. It is a good story not amazing or the best but pretty good.
bladedanteRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Story likes to repeat itself constantly witch is pretty annoying sometimes I end up skimming entire sections because it is exactly what I just read just rewritten.
JknottRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Your sentence structure and word placement need work. Its just doesnt flow properly. I havent seen any spelling errors yet. Interesting story otherwise.. finished your book up to chapter 46. You really need to get an editor. Or slow down on the typing. You repeat information from the previous paragraphs 2 or 3 times.
AlmarnaRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
while capturing the style of the cultivating genre, it unfortunately also caught a bad case of translation grammar, and the story seems almost like a ripoff from "coiling dragon"
chakforRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
All three areas fall totally flat.
Perspective shifts from 3rd person to 1st person are depressingly common. The pace is blisteringly fast. Characters are one-dimensional and flat.
Show us, don't tell us. Proofread for errors, work on your descriptions, and flesh out the story. It has potential, so please don't give up!