Ballad of Mortals
Self-Published
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Description
A man exits a mountain through a crevice. Who is he, and why is he here? Follow along as these questions continue to go unanswered, and the amount of questiones only keeps rising.Set to a fantasy world in the medieval ages.Would appreciate feedback on writingstyle and readability.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Alfrey
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 10
- Views
- 20,039
Chapters(15 total)
- 14 TrialsNov 4, 2015
- 13 A hard day's workNov 3, 2015
- 12 Brewing troubleNov 1, 2015
- PollNov 1, 2015
- 11 Dealing with a demonOct 31, 2015
- 10 Red dustOct 31, 2015
- 9 Making friendsOct 30, 2015
- 8 Out of the frying panOct 29, 2015
- 7 Two ridersOct 29, 2015
- 6 SpoilsOct 28, 2015
- 5 Blood on furOct 27, 2015
- 4 Bear necessitiesOct 27, 2015
- 3 WildlifeOct 26, 2015
- 2 Dark hallsOct 26, 2015
- 1 Light of dawnOct 26, 2015
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Community Reviews(2)
- AlfreyRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5I keep trying to delete this, and I keep getting an error.
- Amethyst DragunirRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Just read up to the current chapter, the stories soso, not bad but not good, but I have one main problem -
WHOS TALKING IN THESE CONVERSATIONS!?!?'
Whenever there is a conversation its like a chapter of just talking, without saying whos saying what, their thoughts on what the others saying, theres no pauses or anything, its like listening an audio tape from a part of a movie, you cant see what is going on so you have no idea what is going on, its like saying "this house looks strange" and decide not to describe how it is strange and leave it off like that.