Bald Cypress Incident
Self-Published
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Description
A short 900-word story from the prompt "Gym Teacher, Fever, Person with a tail". The story is about Aaron and his Gym class in a survival post-apocalyptic setting during the incident with the Bald Cypress.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- MrPicklesAndTea
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 278
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is a story that might as well be a proper fear of the dwarves! The idea of murderous trees is interesting and wild, but the prose and some errors (Hannah specifically is lost and fine in a paragraph) makes it an imperfect piece. It is detailed enough to get the point across, but at the same time it doesn't explain why things have to be done in this way. This was good.
Edit: Switched to 5 stars as the author addressed some of the issues and fixed it up to clear up the confusion in the resolution of the fight. Without the risk of a being broken out of the reading this is great.